Bad grammar, typos, etc.

[lemuel]

in the screenshot http://twitter.com/#!/pcmacgames/status ... to/1/large, slow should be slowly.

[jack1974]

thanks, I just wrote the text today myself after a long testing/coding session

[lemuel]

Well, I shall gladly point out any similar problems. Just release the Beta.

[jack1974]

Thanks, hoping to get chapter1 done by end of month! (it's already written, but need to add all the fights, place vendors, test a bit the flow, etc).

[OromeAldaron]

The subject line of the thread contains an "etc...", so I take this opportunity to tell you (again) that this screenshot is another proof that this artist just rocks. I suggest you try to motivate him to keep making such fantastic art for these games, if possible...

[jack1974]

I agree, though as I posted already in another thread, unfortunately the artist was hired to do hentai comics in Japan so there's no hope (currently) to see his art in a new game

[lemuel]

In the screenshot http://twitter.com/#!/pcmacgames/status ... to/1/large, Sauzer Fists should be Sauzer's Fists.

[jack1974]

Thanks, going to fix it

[jack1974]

I agree, though as I posted already in another thread, unfortunately the artist was hired to do hentai comics in Japan so there's no hope (currently) to see his art in a new game

Also, if you didn't read in the blog/twitter, I managed to hire him again just in time before he starts his manga job (he opened the commission for a short time). I really wanted to have him work on Bionic Heart but I didn't have the artlist ready, so I put him on work on Amber's Magic Shop which is a game with female protagonist, even if there's a GxG romance

[lemuel]

In Screen shot http://twitter.com/#!/pcmacgames/status ... to/1/large

"was a Mother Nature herself" should be "were Mother Nature herself".