Come to think of it, they are supposed to look like normal swords until the Chosen One picks 'em up and they make with the lightshow. Maybe she was drawn to the Hawk Blade because it looked like the sword she left stuck in the ogre. It must be a popular model.
Typolog IV: Return of the Typo
During Fire Tricks:
Saren could then see the wings and it's head and talons... It's should be its.
Saren doused the tent with a pale of water, but it was still burning. Pale should be pail.
Saren's stomach clenched about how exhausting that would be on him. This is worded a tad funky. "Saren's stomach clenched as he thought about how exhausting that would be for him." flows a bit better.
And then their conversation got deeper, and the night lifted as the sun creeped over the horizon. Creeped should be crept.
The night passed as quickly that time as it did on the proceeding nights as Draco showed up every time. The first clause is a bit weird too, and I'm not sure how smoothly I can rework it without hurting the original text. "The night passed as quickly on the proceeding shifts as it did that night, as Draco showed up every time."
Oh man, I really want to know what those conversations were about. But I guess that's what fanfic is for!