Bad grammar, typos, etc.

[MadarFoxfire]

I'm glad I'm helping!

Come to think of it, they are supposed to look like normal swords until the Chosen One picks 'em up and they make with the lightshow. Maybe she was drawn to the Hawk Blade because it looked like the sword she left stuck in the ogre. It must be a popular model.

Typolog IV: Return of the Typo

Spoiler:

There's actually not a lot of them this time, but why break the pattern?

During Fire Tricks:
Saren could then see the wings and it's head and talons... It's should be its.
Saren doused the tent with a pale of water, but it was still burning. Pale should be pail.
Saren's stomach clenched about how exhausting that would be on him. This is worded a tad funky. "Saren's stomach clenched as he thought about how exhausting that would be for him." flows a bit better.
And then their conversation got deeper, and the night lifted as the sun creeped over the horizon. Creeped should be crept.
The night passed as quickly that time as it did on the proceeding nights as Draco showed up every time. The first clause is a bit weird too, and I'm not sure how smoothly I can rework it without hurting the original text. "The night passed as quickly on the proceeding shifts as it did that night, as Draco showed up every time."

Oh man, I really want to know what those conversations were about. But I guess that's what fanfic is for!

[jack1974]

They talked about the weather, of course
Thanks for your help again

[Aleema]

Thanks! I've made the changes.

Spoiler:

Next Draco cutscene is them talking while on guard duty, actually ... But I'm sure they spoke about a lot of things I didn't mention.

[Radivo]

Heard about this game today, tried it and actually liked it. At least as far as i came in it before screen came.

Anyway, when choosing the elf side, one of Myrth's lines are : "They are who were are hunting. They do not belong in the forest." which is quite obviously a typo.

Also, couldn't find any mention of it when doing a quick glance trough a few threads here but when leveling up and pressing the autoassign stats button, it's quite easy to use it to get infinite stats.

[jack1974]

About the autoassign, what version are you playing? and how exactly works the cheat you talk about ? If I click it several times, I don't get extra points, maybe you're playing an old version ?

[Radivo]

Downloaded 0.92 from the website.

Anyway, press autoassign, 3 random points get added to stat total, then take the 3 statpoints back to the statpool and press autoassign again,
each time I did that i got 3 randomly assigned stats.

To clarify, when pressing autoassign, the stats to the left on the display gets changed, ie 15->18. At the same time it says +3 added to the right. But you can remove that to 0 added stats points and it will stay as 18.

[jack1974]

LOL I really don't know how I couldn't have noticed this before!! thanks, will fix it :D

[Aleema]

To be honest, when you show me a line that I wrote and say that the typo is pretty obviously, it really isn't. x_x I'm just hard-wired to read what I wanted to say, I had to re-read that line like 10 times before I caught what was wrong. The brain is so weird like that. Anyway, thanks!

[Radivo]

It's small stuff like these things that are hard to catch if you've played with it for a while while easy to find if you go in with a fresh eye.

[jack1974]

Yes I agree, both on the texts and the small bugs like the auto-assign one (in LOTS of hours of testing I never tried once to reassign the skills manually because I was sure that worked!)