Thread for typos/minor errors/etc.
Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2013 2:41 am
The Loren board had one of these, but I didn't see one here.
(I encountered these playing through 1.52 as Joshua)
Typos:
First entering science lab: "Wow it's huge... but I don't see anyone around?" (should have comma after first word)
Resting: "Now you feel definitely better" (should be "Now you definitely feel better")
First going to landing pad: "It's a magnificent but at same time scary view; what's lurking outside in the wilderness?" (should be "at the same time")
Rebecca: "As you can see, it seems that prince Cliff wasn't kidnapped, but-" (Prince should be capitalized)
Sophia: "And now?Where are they?" (should have space after first '?')
Experience screen: "Hits/shoots" should be "Hits/shots"
Other minor details: In battle: "First Aid Kit Click on a hero to use the item on him, or click close"
Would look better with some kind of separator between item name and description. Also, 'him' may be inappropriate.
(I encountered these playing through 1.52 as Joshua)
Typos:
First entering science lab: "Wow it's huge... but I don't see anyone around?" (should have comma after first word)
Resting: "Now you feel definitely better" (should be "Now you definitely feel better")
First going to landing pad: "It's a magnificent but at same time scary view; what's lurking outside in the wilderness?" (should be "at the same time")
Rebecca: "As you can see, it seems that prince Cliff wasn't kidnapped, but-" (Prince should be capitalized)
Sophia: "And now?Where are they?" (should have space after first '?')
Experience screen: "Hits/shoots" should be "Hits/shots"
Other minor details: In battle: "First Aid Kit Click on a hero to use the item on him, or click close"
Would look better with some kind of separator between item name and description. Also, 'him' may be inappropriate.
