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Re: Art Thread [Queen of Thieves]
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2016 10:36 am
by yayswords
Of course she won't, she hasn't looked at Joanne once.
Re: Art Thread [Queen of Thieves]
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2016 10:56 am
by jack1974
Therjalla is shy !

or better, is weird. She smiles maybe 2-3 times in the whole story!
Re: Art Thread [Queen of Thieves]
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2016 4:29 pm
by jack1974

Lol like always, Thalia's scenes are the best. Her favorite seduction technique didn't work well with Therjalla though...
Re: Art Thread [Queen of Thieves]
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2016 4:56 pm
by yayswords
Is that an acceptable phrasing?
Forsaken, I hope you've been reading up on Seppuku.
Re: Art Thread [Queen of Thieves]
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2016 6:26 pm
by jack1974
Well, if there's something, it's missing a "the" before future, that's it. But that means being super nitpicky.
Re: Art Thread [Queen of Thieves]
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2016 7:51 pm
by Thee Forsaken One
It is perhaps a little run-on but I don't see anything actually wrong in that sentence. Could perhaps have a comma between 'and' and 'in'.
Re: Art Thread [Queen of Thieves]
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2016 8:55 pm
by jack1974
Don't worry, yaysword is just having withdrawal symptom (hope I wrote it correctly!) from the lack of RPGs to play

Re: Art Thread [Queen of Thieves]
Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2016 2:01 am
by yayswords
Seems you
can say "in future". Hmf.
jack1974 wrote:Don't worry, yaysword is just having withdrawal symptom (hope I wrote it correctly!) from the lack of RPGs to play

Critical miss, sir. Having finally made an enjoyable melee party in PoE, I'm more like overdosed.
Re: Art Thread [Queen of Thieves]
Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2016 7:06 am
by jack1974
Hah, think I'm waiting to play PoE because I need to finish all the games first! sigh sob

Re: Art Thread [Queen of Thieves]
Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2016 5:20 pm
by Troyen
yayswords wrote:Seems you can say "in future". Hmf.
You can? Sounds really weird.