Help with new website headlines :)

[jack1974]

Haha no, I think you're confusing with Spirited Heart Remember me has only one race, humans http://www.winterwolves.com/rememberme.htm

[Calimachus]

Right, was thinking about Spirited Hearts, as is it mentioned above. Sorry. But for "Remember Me", what about "An accident, missing memories and his ex. Can you stay true to him or fall for someone else?" But maybe too long?

[jack1974]

Haha no problems Yeah what you suggested for Remember Me is ok but is too long sadly
For some games I just went with a more standard description though, like "Take control of a TV Station and create your own network" or "The ultimate boxing management simulation game". I must say that for non-story based games seems easier!

[Calimachus]

Yep, definitely easier. How many characters are allowed? Maybe "An accident, amnesia and his ex - fight back or date someone else?"

[jack1974]

I was thinking something like "Can Amy win Aaron's heart back, or find someone else to love?" (written better maybe lol)

[Calimachus]

Hi,

I didn't thought you would change the website so fast, I was just thinking about making a list for the other games It is quite an improvement for your website. Looks very good.
It was nice to see some of my suggestions on the sites, glad I could be of help.
I think for 'Bionic Heart 2' in the headline, it should be 'multiple points of view'. And for 'Always remember me', I think it sounds better to write 'will you fight back or date someone else?'.

Keep up the good work

[jack1974]

Thanks, will change the headlines tomorrow
I was already doing the redesign since a week after Christmas, but I didn't work on it fulltime. It was about time that I finished it!