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Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 10:40 am
by jack1974
Haha no, I think you're confusing with Spirited Heart

Remember me has only one race, humans
http://www.winterwolves.com/rememberme.htm
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 10:48 am
by Calimachus

Right, was thinking about Spirited Hearts, as is it mentioned above. Sorry. But for "Remember Me", what about "An accident, missing memories and his ex. Can you stay true to him or fall for someone else?" But maybe too long?
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 12:47 pm
by jack1974
Haha no problems

Yeah what you suggested for Remember Me is ok but is too long sadly

For some games I just went with a more standard description though, like "Take control of a TV Station and create your own network" or "The ultimate boxing management simulation game". I must say that for non-story based games seems easier!
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 1:34 pm
by Calimachus
Yep, definitely easier. How many characters are allowed? Maybe "An accident, amnesia and his ex - fight back or date someone else?"
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 1:54 pm
by jack1974
I was thinking something like "Can Amy win Aaron's heart back, or find someone else to love?" (written better maybe lol)
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Wed Mar 20, 2013 9:33 pm
by Calimachus
Hi,
I didn't thought you would change the website so fast,

I was just thinking about making a list for the other games

It is quite an improvement for your website. Looks very good.
It was nice to see some of my suggestions on the sites, glad I could be of help.
I think for 'Bionic Heart 2' in the headline, it should be 'multiple points of view'. And for 'Always remember me', I think it sounds better to write 'will you fight back or date someone else?'.
Keep up the good work

Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Wed Mar 20, 2013 9:43 pm
by jack1974
Thanks, will change the headlines tomorrow

I was already doing the redesign since a week after Christmas, but I didn't work on it fulltime. It was about time that I finished it!