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Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 5:04 pm
by jack1974
If you follow me on twitter you might now I'm in the process of redesigning my website. The new game page layout will be like this:
http://winterwolves.com/test/summersession.htm
I am having some troubles to come up with short headlines that describe the game, to place under the title (like in the page above).
If anyone has any suggestions for my games, I'm all ears

In particular I am stuck with Heileen 3 Sea Maidens (should tell something about dating 4 beautiful ladies) and Spirited Heart Girl's Love

Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 5:41 pm
by Calimachus
What about something like "4 beauties to date, your choice, only one love" ?
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 5:57 pm
by jack1974
Well, that's surely better than what I could come up with (also for language problem). I had written "Win the heart of four beautiful ladies of the sea"

will probably use yours instead! if you have suggestions for other games feel free to post them!
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 9:43 pm
by fleetp
For Summer Sessions you have "Your cute classmate, your sexy professor, your secret admirer - can you win their hearts?"
I'd suggest "Your cute classmate, your sexy professor, your secret admirer - whose heart can you win?"
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 10:58 pm
by jack1974
Yes seems better, thanks!
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 1:36 am
by Calimachus
For Loren perhaps "A fierce amazon princess - can you earn her respect and her heart?" or "Earn the respect of your amazon mistress - but who will win your heart?"
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 8:56 am
by jack1974
I think the second is better, since from the first players could think that Loren is the only romance option

thanks
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 9:43 am
by Calimachus
For Planet Stronghold: "End a war between humans, aliens and robots - and find true love!"
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 9:49 am
by jack1974
Haha thanks, keep them coming

any suggestion for Always Remember Me ?
Re: Help with new website headlines :)
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 10:24 am
by Calimachus
Huh, perhaps "Choose your race, your profession and win over the girl of your dreams." ??