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OK here's a more detailed sketch. Feedback! I think is great personally

I love it! <3 Loren looks so pretty.

Seeing the larger more detailed sketch, I think she looks great, doesn't seem short to me.

Looks fantastic.

OK, then will tell artist to go on. Can't wait to see the other ones

I think the perspective may be skewed a bit, the campfire feels tad bit weird. Small and... oddly slanted. I can tell from all the campfires I've built.

... should I be worried because I'm more focused on that rather than the most obvious object in the sketch?

Wait, there's a campfire in the image ??!?

Hehe

Will they have different expressions in these camp talk pictures?

Yes, the plan is five base expressions and a different arm/leg pose (but nothing more, otherwise, with all those characters would take too much time).

Well, on just a quick glance, her bust seems a little smaller than her original sprite in Loren 1. But it's just a sketch, right?

But I mean, compare her to the default Loren from Loren 1.... Definitely different bust size, as of now.
Not really that important, I guess, I don't have an extreme love for big boobs or anything, but just something I noticed.