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Re: feedback wanted!

Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 9:26 pm
by jack1974
DunKalar wrote: I know it is a pain in the ass to write such a story ;-) If the Yuri writer from Nicole is good, maybe he can support some routes?
Well I think nobody knows Loren's world as good as Aleema so I really hope she'll do it, even if takes more time will be worth the wait :)

Re: feedback wanted!

Posted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 8:11 pm
by at-a-glance
I can see why you might want to split it in two: new buyers probably won't want to pay $50 for an indie game from someone they've never heard of. I'm sure whatever you pick will be great. :)

On an unrelated side note, I've already officially dubbed the Nook vs Draco jelousy scene the Uke Battle Royale. Catchy, no? :P

Re: feedback wanted!

Posted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 10:51 pm
by Valorous_Roland
Was gone a while... Looks at the character list... Who is this "Edge" you speak of? What have I missed?
...Well, a lot of this topic, but here's my opinion anyway!

Although no Amukiki makes me very sad, I like the idea of having a mix of old and new characters. But I think Jul shouldn't be romanceable in the first part. I guess I can't say that, actually, not knowing how it works, but it seems a little fast, doesn't it?

Re: feedback wanted!

Posted: Fri Sep 06, 2013 2:31 am
by P_Tigras
Valorous_Roland, via the process of elimination, I'd say that "Edge" is Odurat.

Regarding Jul, I'd say that it depends on your definition of "romanceable". For Jul to fall in love, I agree that it would be a little fast, but that's not the same thing as starting the romance process, or even bedding her. I expect Jul's heart to be much harder to attain than her body. I also expect her to flirt with the protagonist from day one, even if she's a prisoner. Given that she's a succubus, and that succubi are pros at using their sex appeal to manipulate and gain control of others, It would be very strange if she didn't.

Re: feedback wanted!

Posted: Fri Sep 06, 2013 5:48 am
by jack1974
Yes Edge is Odurat indeed :) that doc is a bit outdated, so take it with a grain of salt!
At this point, all considered, I think I'm really going with Anima's initial suggestion. So you'll get pin-ups CG of ALL the characters (except Elenor/Saren), and not just Mesphit/Chambara (and I think people could have complained if I just did that).
So the romances will span in the two parts, in the first you see the pin-up, in the second the romance scene. I think that's the best solution for everyone :)

Re: feedback wanted!

Posted: Fri Sep 06, 2013 6:17 am
by Nightsnow
I am still not sure what you mean with pin up?

But if that mean that every character's romance arc, spans both parts I do think that it is a good idea.

Re: feedback wanted!

Posted: Fri Sep 06, 2013 6:29 am
by jack1974
Pin up is an image (sexy :wink:) of each character. So not Elenor/Saren kissing/making love with each character (that would take too much time and money to make) but a scene showing each character in an interesting situation. For example, Mesphit bathing in a lake naked, or Chambara wearing a see-through clothing (they'll be added/integrated into the story, not just be random things of course!).

Re: feedback wanted!

Posted: Fri Sep 06, 2013 6:31 am
by gino
Thank you for listening to Anima! when you said that his solution wasn't feasible, I was sad. Now, with even an extra image for each char!!!!!! I'm even more eager to play it! I think you picked the top solution 8)

Re: feedback wanted!

Posted: Fri Sep 06, 2013 12:46 pm
by Valorous_Roland
Whew... I thought either Odurat got the ax and was replaced by a new character (Edge), or he got renamed. I'm happy it's neither. I could never stop calling him "Ratty".

I'm interested in all CGs, including pin-ups, but... Will they be the same, removed, or altered if you play with the "safe" version?

Re: feedback wanted!

Posted: Fri Sep 06, 2013 12:48 pm
by jack1974
Probably altered, with the possibility to skip of course. Even if wouldn't make much sense for Mesphit to bath with clothes on :lol:
(just to be clear even in the "hot version" you'll only see his upper body naked, it's not like there's full nudity!)