Ted x Nicole Fanfiction

A mystery life sim set in college http://www.winterwolves.com/nicole.htm
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sun-glimmer
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Ted x Nicole Fanfiction

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Hi. I decided to write Ted x Nicole fanfiction. Want to read and leave a review? It's been a while since I last wrote anything, but I hope fans will like it. :)

You can read it here:
http://sun-glimmer.tumblr.com/post/8349 ... fanfiction
Or here:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10290013/1 ... -s-Brigade
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Re: Ted x Nicole Fanfiction

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I don't ordinarily read fan fiction (walls of text), but I quickly read yours. You might wish to consider making a fan made visual novel. :)
Why? I like big ones, that's why.
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Re: Ted x Nicole Fanfiction

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Really? Wow, thanks for the idea. Maybe I should try doing that :)
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Re: Ted x Nicole Fanfiction

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Oops, you asked for a review, and I failed to provide any comments.

Your grammar, spelling and punctuation are good. I didn't see any typos. :P

While I have not played the Nicole VN, your story was interesting enough to keep me reading. :wink:

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Why? I like big ones, that's why.
sun-glimmer
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Re: Ted x Nicole Fanfiction

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Wow, thanks fleetp! :D I really appreciate it. Now I feel very motivated to write ;p
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Re: Ted x Nicole Fanfiction

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sun-glimmer wrote:Hi. I decided to write Ted x Nicole fanfiction. Want to read and leave a review? It's been a while since I last wrote anything, but I hope fans will like it. :)

You can read it here:
http://sun-glimmer.tumblr.com/post/8349 ... fanfiction
Or here:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10290013/1 ... -s-Brigade
Chapter two is now up:
http://sun-glimmer.tumblr.com/post/8389 ... hapter-two
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10290013/2 ... -s-Brigade
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