On your previous pic with the advice tip:
You can roam freely the world -- Should be -- You can roam freely around the world
Also you should not use contractions with advise suggestion, that should only be reserved for characters speaking. So change 'don't' to do not and change 'you're' to you are.
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- jack1974
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Thanks, will fix the text 
- Miakoda
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So cute
Of course, you really need to make a romanceable ratwoman in a future game
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- jack1974
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Yes they make just a short appearance. At least for now, maybe will show them again later in the game 
- Franka
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Sooo... are there Rabbitmen stealing the carrots?
- jack1974
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Whattt you just put such a BIG SPOILER like this!?!?!!??! 
Damn the ultimate secret of the game is revealed
sob sob
Damn the ultimate secret of the game is revealed
- yayswords
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It wasn't a spoiler until you confirmed it.
If at first try it doesn't explode, it ain't Jack who wrote the code.
- jack1974
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Damn me!!! *facepalm* at this point, with the main mystery revealed, I should cancel the project! 
Jokes apart got all the sidequests proofread, so I can finally get to code the whole first Season, if nothing else interferes (like for example another game Greenlit... ahem
) I could be finished by end of month 
Jokes apart got all the sidequests proofread, so I can finally get to code the whole first Season, if nothing else interferes (like for example another game Greenlit... ahem
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Alright just in time for some post finals relaxation. Im looking forward to testing the first season.
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Finished this quest today. A pity to kill that small teddy bear. He only wants you as dinner
