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When Chalassa is used as a decoy to lure out the Minotaur
Chalassa: Oh, let's hope nobody is following me! I'm just a innocent harmless girl!
'an'

After the Minotaur-fight, if you choose to pull out the horns:
Rowinda: Well, anyway, I just used a little magic to loosen them up and they they popped right out like...
Is she excited enough to repeat the word or should it be 'then they' or just one 'they'?

While brewing the potion:
Main Twin: Is it supposed to be turning that poo-green color?
Should this be: ...'to be turning into that poo-green...' ?


At the Dingirran merchant camp just before the gnolls:
Vaelis: Thanks, we'll talke a look then.
'take'

When the heroes meet up with Daronas, he tells them about the 3 kinds of trouble around:
Jariel: Theee?
'Three?'

When they finally find Shagala:
Other Twin: You're up in a tree!
Nothing weird there, but you'd expect Shagala to reply to that, not Daronas...
Daronas: I know! Someone get me a ladder, or something!

meet up with Daronas, who's desperately trying to find his men and Shagala and he describes all the beasts roaming around... he keeps his happy face on the whole time. Totally suspicious. I think he's really a demon.

Since when you're an alchemist?
should be "Since when are you an alchemist?"

Err... yes, what they have to do with alchemy?
should be "what do they have to do with"

He's obviously not asleep if he just roared! Let's follow Vaelis's advice and avoid him.
should be "Vaelis' advice"

Go set up camp and then I get working on those spells.
should be "I'll get working"

Well, first I have to wait for it dry and harden, then I can sew it.
should be "wait for it to dry and harden,"

But they underestimated the gnoll's strength and lost many men in the process.
One of the conditions is to allow the gnoll's to enforce their tax.
both should be "gnolls' "

They're the ones who live underground and guard tresaure, right?
should be "treasure"

We are clearly outnumbered and would suffer severe damages in a fight.
should be "severe damage"

All Dingirrans are slavers and they pass through the toll every day.
"pass through every day" or "pass through the Pass every day" or "pay the toll to pass every day"

Is it because that any violence towards humans instigated by the gnolls is a violation of the peace treaty with the Empire?
should be "Is it because any violence"

Then, if you forgive my curiosity, why didn't we just travel by ship?
should be "if you'll forgive"

Unfortunately, we've also found footprints of the beasts in this area. So we fear for the worst.
should be "So we fear the worst."

I know Shagala - if she has her mind set on finding something, she's taking any risks, despite her age.
should be "she'll take any risks,"

I climbed! Did you think I'd grow wings and fly?
should be "Did you think I grew wings and flew?"

But... how do put this... we weren't very successful.
should be "how to put this..."

We've been mostly living from what we still had from last year, and from what little we could find in the south.
should be "living of what we still had"

A few of them know and use dark magic, yes, but I don't see what profit they'd be making of this.
should be "making from this."

Yes, is true...
should be "it's true..."

They certainly have ways of getting their fingers on such creatures.
I'd say "get their hands on"

No - I never encountered something even remotely like this.
should be "encountered anything"

But now that you mention it... we should already be far past the boulders. But haven't seen them all.
either "boulders, but haven't" or "But we haven't"

Because no one will be hunting you any more, o Old One. You are now safe.
should be "oh, Old One."

Have lived here for long time. And there has never been anything but peace between the forest and them.
maybe "They've lived here for a long time, and there has"

I really can't imagine Rowinda fitting into anywhere.
I can't either, but I think you mean "Rowinda fitting in anywhere."

and finally....
That ain't "raven-black" hair.

If you choose to Help the "Ambushed Man" you get options on trying to talk yourself out of fighting. The last option is:
"Tell him we are all former slaves."

If you pick the right option to Ask why they are ambushing people, you get to the point where Auris evaluates Riley and Shea (Other twin) says:
"Riley, don't anger him!"

...when trying to convince Leif Erikson that his way of honor sucks. She has a couple expressions, but lots of exclamations accompanying her impassive face while Rowinda and Leif look like they're shouting. As an example, take the line "Warrior's honor is what made Krimm do all those terrible things!"