I'll just post some random stuff as the development goes on. Like today I've been reading a lot of second chapter texts and wanted to share with you the following lines:
in brown the writer's comments
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Shouldn't it be "weak to kisses"?
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Yes obviously, but it's just a first draft, as you can see by the comments
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Epic demons are purple, right?
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LOL It should be so much fun, reading the first drat and then watch it take form and refining itself with every correction.
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the beginning of chapter 3 of Loren 2! As you can see, the writer really knows what makes a topselling game!
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Darth Vader in a bikini is a scary thought, especially old Anakin from Return of the Jedi...
Now Loren can fight in a bikini all she wants. It's even practical since body armor doesn't stop light sabers and would just slow her down.
Now Loren can fight in a bikini all she wants. It's even practical since body armor doesn't stop light sabers and would just slow her down.
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See, that's why is a formidable opponent. People run away screaming in horror at the sightP_Tigras wrote:Darth Vader in a bikini is a scary thought, especially old Anakin from Return of the Jedi...
On this I think we all agree!P_Tigras wrote: Now Loren can fight in a bikini all she wants. It's even practical since body armor doesn't stop light sabers and would just slow her down.