If you follow me on twitter you might now I'm in the process of redesigning my website. The new game page layout will be like this:

http://winterwolves.com/test/summersession.htm



I am having some troubles to come up with short headlines that describe the game, to place under the title (like in the page above).

If anyone has any suggestions for my games, I'm all ears

In particular I am stuck with Heileen 3 Sea Maidens (should tell something about dating 4 beautiful ladies) and Spirited Heart Girl's Love

What about something like "4 beauties to date, your choice, only one love" ?

Well, that's surely better than what I could come up with (also for language problem). I had written "Win the heart of four beautiful ladies of the sea"

will probably use yours instead! if you have suggestions for other games feel free to post them!

For Summer Sessions you have "Your cute classmate, your sexy professor, your secret admirer - can you win their hearts?"

I'd suggest "Your cute classmate, your sexy professor, your secret admirer - whose heart can you win?"

Yes seems better, thanks!

For Loren perhaps "A fierce amazon princess - can you earn her respect and her heart?" or "Earn the respect of your amazon mistress - but who will win your heart?"

I think the second is better, since from the first players could think that Loren is the only romance option thanks

For Planet Stronghold: "End a war between humans, aliens and robots - and find true love!"

Haha thanks, keep them coming any suggestion for Always Remember Me ?

Huh, perhaps "Choose your race, your profession and win over the girl of your dreams." ??

Haha no, I think you're confusing with Spirited Heart Remember me has only one race, humans http://www.winterwolves.com/rememberme.htm

Right, was thinking about Spirited Hearts, as is it mentioned above. Sorry. But for "Remember Me", what about "An accident, missing memories and his ex. Can you stay true to him or fall for someone else?" But maybe too long?

Haha no problems Yeah what you suggested for Remember Me is ok but is too long sadly

For some games I just went with a more standard description though, like "Take control of a TV Station and create your own network" or "The ultimate boxing management simulation game". I must say that for non-story based games seems easier!

Yep, definitely easier. How many characters are allowed? Maybe "An accident, amnesia and his ex - fight back or date someone else?"

I was thinking something like "Can Amy win Aaron's heart back, or find someone else to love?" (written better maybe lol)

Hi,



I didn't thought you would change the website so fast, I was just thinking about making a list for the other games It is quite an improvement for your website. Looks very good.

It was nice to see some of my suggestions on the sites, glad I could be of help.

I think for 'Bionic Heart 2' in the headline, it should be 'multiple points of view'. And for 'Always remember me', I think it sounds better to write 'will you fight back or date someone else?'.



Keep up the good work

Thanks, will change the headlines tomorrow

I was already doing the redesign since a week after Christmas, but I didn't work on it fulltime. It was about time that I finished it!